I do see some positive progress!
However…there are still some inconsistencies in your document that need resolving…it is not clear you understand what your research method is. If you are truly planning to interview people as your method…then you need an analysis plan for analyzing interview data.
You also need to provide your interview protocol….that is part of the proposal…so work on a draft of the questions you will ask the veterans when you interview them.
See the attached with my comments.
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